http://joosephine.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] joosephine.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] balaa 2006-12-11 04:17 pm (UTC)

I know that my knowledge of anatomy never will reach your level, but at least I can try to help you out. It is a lot easier to spot mistakes than try to not make them oneslef. Sadly.

The sketch of the wolf which you wanted to place in an autumny setting, it can probably be helped with just a few simple things:
Try to make his/her right back leg even less visible, i.e. place it closer to the wolf's body, making less of it be seen. The wolf's left back leg should be placed a little further down, so that the knee instead of pointing outward is pointing more to the horizontal bottom of the picture. Also, the Achilles' tendon is a little too evident. Consider it, if the foot is bent in such a way, would that tendon be as portrouding?

Just a few suggestions, probably not worth anything. It is tjhe thought which matters. I would really like to see you being content with the picture as I think it is a very appealing and interesting subject ^^

Your canines are becoming too realistic for your own good ;D

Best wishes, as always,
Josephine

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