oh don't be hard on yourself..tis a marked improvement! Thank you! I appreciate that you took the time to help me out :D! Think the thing that bothered me most is the position of the rear right leg(his right)..I wanted it to extend back further away from his body but I can't get it to work..May have to just redraw the pose several times and hope it works out in one of those..

haha its so hard to try and explain what I envision in my head..it probably sounds like complete gibberish XD.