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As promised, posting a tiny snippet of writing whilst holding my breath about doing so! Just a little something about a desert leopardess.

Simoom

mantle of snow kissed cool by moon
silk sable rosettes painted pristinely
eyes of ancient amber
burning through the night
She is present and she is perfect
as the folds in windswept sand
parched of rain
quiet but untamed
and later
hot and burning
beneath the milky snow mantle
and smooth sheet of silk sable rosettes.

Date: 2010-03-12 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theassassinnox.livejournal.com
You paint a very beautiful, quiet picture.

Date: 2010-03-12 10:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wolf-nymph.livejournal.com
This is so beautiful....

Date: 2010-03-12 11:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] redra.livejournal.com
"She is present and she is perfect"

...I like that. B:

Date: 2010-03-13 06:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nimirpard.livejournal.com
It paints a vivid picture with just a few words, and I like the symmetry of the first and last couple of lines.

Date: 2010-03-13 10:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] puzzelo.livejournal.com
You are very talented. I enjoyed your little writing snip very much. Just wanted to say that it's nice to hear from you again :) ^.^ glad you are still alive.

Date: 2010-03-19 03:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cyroneradurna.livejournal.com
Oh wow, I like this. It definatly plants a visual image in my head. Great work =^^=

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